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Sugar Rush - Kim Noel

V1:

Seeing people, makes me think

The positive vibes I get

I need to concentrate on my thought

Instead I see the mistakes flash by

Chorus:

I need a sugar rush,

I need to control my emotions

Cause I need help, I spill my thoughts

So, help me, cause I need a Sugar Rush

V2:

My thoughts are with you

Let me say Hello

Let me find the bridge between

You and Me

V3:

The faintness spring forth

Grabs me down, 

Death scrolls over me as it was

A cloud of smoke covering

My Eyes

Chorus:

I need a sugar rush,

I need to control my emotions

Cause I need help, I spill my thoughts

So, help me, cause I need a Sugar Rush

V4:

The feeling of morning tiredness

Takes over like a tiger in me

I can’t control my emotions

Please help me, help me

V5:

I catch my breath on the glass

I write a secret message upon

You send me one back

Protecting the sounds of our voices

Chorus:

I need a sugar rush,

I need to control my emotions

Cause I need help, I spill my thoughts

So, help me, cause I need a Sugar Rush

V6:

I need help with the chaos of time

Let me catch up, let me catch my breath

Let's enjoy the moments between 

Hold my hand and forget that

Chorus:

I need a sugar rush,

I need to control my emotions

Cause I need help, I spill my thoughts

So, help me, cause I need a Sugar Rush